Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Facing your struggles


In the Old Man and The Sea, Santiago encounters many powerful forces and obstacles throughout the book. When Santiago encounters these forces and obstacles, he finds a way to get past them and never gives up. Although, these struggles he had at sea did take a toll on him and he returned in rough shape and very tired. Some forces and obstacles Santiago struggled with throughout the story were the big marlin, the sharks, the lack of weapons Santiago had, and the old man's age.

One powerful force the old man encountered was the huge, aggressive marlin that Santiago was trying so hard to catch. The whole plot of the story was Santiago trying to catch this massive marlin he had hooked out at sea. When describing the marlin, Santiago says, "He is two feet longer than the skiff"(62). Santiago was fascinated when he realized how big the marlin was. The 20 foot, 1500 pound marlin challenged Santiago mentally and physically. When feeling hopeless, the talkative man would talk to himself and the fish to help his mind stay straight. Also, when he got cuts, he would put them in the salt water to help the bleeding and healing.

Secondly, sharks that were trying to eat his marlin put up quite the fight against Santiago and left him exhausted. Even though he was exhausted, the sharks brought out the best in the character in the story showing that although it was doubtful he could defend the fish, he would fight until he couldn't any more. "When he saw the shark he leaned over the side and punched at him"(109). With his hands severely cut and calloused, Santiago courage and determination to save his fish.

Next, the lack of weapons the old man possessed with him was a major obstacle he encountered during his trip. I believe Ernest Hemingway chose to enter very few weapons into his story to show Santiago's desperation to catch the marlin and also kill the sharks. "But there was no hatchet and no knife"(115). He gave Santiago just enough weapons to catch the marlin, kill the marlin, and kill a shark or two. But, when Santiago ran out of weapons, more sharks kept coming so he had to use his bare fists as told in the previous paragraph. Santiago didn't prepare for the unpredictable events he would face on his fishing trip.

Lastly, Santiago's old age played a huge role in his journey out at sea. "Everything about him was old"(10). I believe Mr.Hemingway gave Santiago his old age for a reason. If Santiago was young, strong, and in-shape, the story wouldn't have happened like it did. Santiago would easily be able to catch the marlin and still be prepared and ready to fight the sharks. But, since Santiago was old, the old man tired more quickly, had a hard time fighting the sharks, wasn't very healthy, therefore he almost died while out to sea. The trip caused the old man to become exhausted and delirious.

In conclusion, the forces and struggles Santiago encountered in the story were the big marlin, sharks, his old age, and the lack of weaponry he possessed on his journey. All of these obstacles and forces Santiago battled effected him greatly throughout the story. The Old Man and The Sea told a lot about Santiago's character and patience considering he remained 84 days without a catch and still waited to catch the marlin. In the end, I believe the theme of the story was to always try your hardest and you will get rewarded even if the reward is not what you would expect. Santiago caught the fish, the sharks ate it, but he still had the skeleton to prove he had caught one of the biggest marlins ever. Even though he was disappointed, he was proud of himself for catching the marlin.

8 comments:

  1. His thesis was Santiago struggled with throughout the story were the big marlin, the sharks, the lack of weapons Santiago had, and the old man's age. It was very clear and got to the point. It was awesome. "When he saw the shark he leaned over the side and punched at him"(109). I think this is the best quote because it’s just plain sweet. It sounds like hes got some lettuce going on for himself. I think the strongest part of the essay was the 2nd body paragraph. There was a lot of content and yeah. I think the weakest part of the essay was the conclusion. I think it could tie it together a little better. But good job.

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  2. I. i think evans thesis is Some forces and obstacles Santiago struggled with throughout the story were the big marlin, the sharks, the lack of weapons Santiago had, and the old man's age." its good and engaged me so much!
    II. i think that evans best quotation would be "Everything about him was old". i think this because it shows the the old man is very old and that was one of the obstacles that evan stated in the beginning that would be a challenge.
    III. i think that one of the strongest thigns about this essay would be the oragnization. the paragraphs flow very nicely and the author stays on topic the entire time. It is so good.
    IV. i think that one thing evan could improve would be the conclusion as well. it didnt really reflect the strong examples and such throughout the essay. GOOD JOB

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  3. The thesis of this essay is that the old man was struggleing with many obstacles including his age and the sharks. It was a well written thesis. And is very interesting.
    "But there was no hatchet and no knife"(115). This is the best quote. it shows an obstacle that the old man has to overcome. this one being the lack of tools that he had. He had trouble catching the fish.
    One thing this essay did well was its organization the entire essay was a good read well most of it.
    I think that the conclusion could be a bit stronger. It needs a bit of work but other than that it was a good essay.

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  4. 1. The thesis of this essay is that the old man came to and overcame many obstacles. It was OK but could be more interesting.
    2. The strongest argument has to have been the one that Santiago did not have enough weapons. His quote backs it up and it is the most logical.
    3. The essay has four strong arguments. Evan came up with some convincing arguments that were well written.
    4.The intro needs to start of more general. Start off with some obstacles you have faced or something."In The Old Man and The Sea, Santiago encounters many powerful forces and obstacles throughout the book."

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  5. 1. When Santiago encounters these forces and obstacles, he finds a way to get past them and never gives up. ...i think this is the thesis.. the thesis is clear. it allows the reader to continue reading the essay and understand why some of the obsicles snatiago faced were such a challenege for him.
    2.the quotes on page 115 gives the reader a sense on how santiago had such a risky and dangerous challenge when he was reeling in the marlin with no weapon to fend off the sharks.
    3.when translation into a new obsticle, the essay flows into it. also the essay is organized into differnt sections that allow for eazy reading.
    4. the conclusion need a little work it dosent really make sense..to me at least but other wise that good job.

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  6. The thesis is that Santiago encounters forces and obstacles. It is clear and concise. It engages me.
    "When he saw the shark he leaned over the side and punched at him"(109). This shows that Santiago was deteremined. It made it stand out from others because of the way it show what Santiago was like while the sharks were taking bite outs of the marlin.
    The essay has a good introduction. It is very organized. It explains the examples of the essay.
    The weakest aspect of this essay was the conclusion. It could have more detail. Good job.

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  7. 1. The thesis is that all of us have obstacles we have to overcome. It mentions examples of the old man's obstacles, such as the sea. The essay was well-focused.
    2. “‘I wish I had [Manolin]. To help me and to see this’” (48) was my favorite quote. It helps show how alone the old man was out on the open sea.
    3. Your word choice in the essay was very well done. I liked how you described some of the things in the story and the words you chose were interesting.
    4. I agree with Nate. Try to come up with a synonym for obstacles. Also adding a little more detail here and there could help. nice job on the essay!

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  8. 1.the thesis of the story is people encounter many obsticales and have to overcome them. In this situation the old man has to overcome the marlin and sharks.
    2.I think the quote in the third paragraph is the best. i think this because my favorite part of the book was when Santiago punched the shark in the face.
    3.something good about this essay is the quotes. you put really good quotes that fit the paragraph they were in and it worked.
    4.something you could work on is adding in more interesting verbs and litterary terms.

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